I have no complaints about your characterization. Your characters are fun to play off and follow. However you have a tendency of dropping threads rather frequently. It's difficult to maintain CR with you because many threads and logs are left incomplete. This is not limited to a single incident or two either, but rather it is an ongoing concern. Myself and others are left uncertain about the outcome of plot aspects due to lack of response on your part. This is something you may wish to keep in mind in the future.
Re: KIRSTEN